Planning and Production: Script





During the week of December 11-15th we created the script for our project. We all brainstormed ideas and when we had a solid one, my partner, Sam, primarily wrote the draft for the script. Once completed, I gave insight into making character dialogue seem more natural. This is also where we decided most of the camera directions, although they were revised later. Besides making character language seem more colloquial I also add the concept of a "boss" character, who remains unseen yet feared. I also had the idea to match the first few shots of the film with a musical beat. We also had two different ideas for an ending, and we all agreed upon ending it with a rear view mirror shot of a car in the distance.

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